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Post by alisionclaire on Jan 25, 2011 13:41:00 GMT -8
Alison Alyssa Jayce!:
THE BASICS Name;Alison alyssa Jayce Age; 7 Birthday; 2/21 Gender; Female Occupation; Little sister Human, Splicer, or Little Sister; Little sister Ryan or Atlas;Ryan Plasmids; N/a
THE OUTER LAYER Physical Appearance; Missing: Alison Alyssa Jayce. Last seen: Arcadia, in the tea garden. Has blue eyes, light brown hair, Red dress, Carrying a teddy bear. If seen PLEASE contact Regina and Paulson Jayce. we really miss our little angel! Portrayed By; Sophie Vavasseur
THE INNER LAYER Strengths; Loves her "Mr. Bubbles",and her teddy Weaknesses; way to trusting of the other daddies, tends to pout alot when Mr bubbles doesn't move fast enough. Personality; Alison was a sweet little girl, anyone could attest to that.
THE PAST History;Born: Alison Alyssa Jayce to Regina and Paulson Jayce. She was found Wandering alone in the tea garden and three splicers attacked her, leaving her with a small scar. two people found her brought her to Fontaine's home for girls. there she was taken to another facility, and turned into a little sister. Now she roams rapture with her daddy and an adam needle in her hand.
PUT YOU TO THE TEST Roleplay Sample; Alice Sat alone on the front steps of her parents flat watching the clouds roll. The wizarding world had become a dangerous place, and even for someone as sheltered as Alice, she could see the sign of the times. Things wouldn't stay the same for long, and Muggle born families had to register now. This worried Alice and allot of her family since they had Muggle friends and Alice was very close to her Au Pair, Louise. Would Louise have to go away back to France and stay there, would she have an Au Pair when she came home for the school holidays?
These Questions bugged Alice and she wanted answers, But asking her parents was a no go. They were to busy planning Alice's official “Going off to school” party, So Alice was stuck watching the clouds and waiting for lunch to be prepared. She’d go inside, have lunch as probably ask Louise about it, that’s what she’d do. She watched a mother and a little girl walking hand in hand, and she missed the days that her mother and her could do that. Tea parties were no longer as grand, and mother daughter day was gone for good it seemed.it wasn't from Alice's lack of trying to get close to her mom again,Claire was a social butterfly. “Madame Alice! Lunch iz Served! Please come inside right now!” Louise Yelled out the front door prompting Alice to run inside.
BEHIND THE SCENES Alias; Mackie the duckie girl AKA stephanie Password; Obi wan How you found us;Site on proboards Other Characters; N/a
cred to kelsey of IAEH ! for application
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Post by FAYE ALDEN on Jun 24, 2011 22:50:19 GMT -8
You're gonna need quite a bit more in a few things, lol. For the personality, just explain what she looks like. It's not a missing persons report, XD. Explain what she looked like before she became a Little Sister, and any specific thing that seperates her from others now that she is a Little Sister.
One to two paragraphs is needed for Personality. You have one sentence, lol. So, please fix that.
Also, two to three paragraphs is needed for History. You only have one. What was her life like before she became a Little sister? How did she get there? Why did her parents decide to move to Rapture? does she have any siblings?
If you fix these, you will be accepted right away, XD. Thank you!
--Little Red
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